Hey Irva!Your drawings are always so delicate and beautifully shaded. I'm actually really liking the first cropped version... it just has more impact. I think it could just be because the uncropped version has too much negative space on the left. I feel like the left side has to be cropped a little more so that the image becomes more of a vertically long illustration.Otherwise, this piece is really beautiful, and I love the netting around the face. The geometry of the lines work very well against the organic shading of the face.
Lovely work Irva, I agree with Chelsea about the cropping to the left. I also love that little gun in the corner. I really like the way you mix the different colours of ball point pen.